'The Rains' Writing Relay - Boys vs. Girls
To mix things up, our second submission was a group of four and we divided them by gender: Group 1 - Megan M., Megan K. (Megan squared), and Group 2 - Bradley O., Scott S. Thus proving that "men are from Mars and women are from Venus". Click HERE to read their submission.
Read, Reflect, Comment.
posted by Corey Charron @ 10:57 AM
10 comments
10 Comments:
This is great!
I love the way you keep killing off the other group’s character. It really has a lot of voice and originality. I also enjoyed how Claude abandons his accent at the end to say "whatever dude". Can't wait to read the next one.
Great Story!
Man, oh man. When I set this up, I didn't realize that the girls were going to get into the blood and gore! I wonder if there will be any characters left at the end...or will they all be killed off?
Keep em coming...
Ahh Scott you wrote this story, so you are probably going to say it is great. hahaha
Sweet story. I love the character's name, Prime Minister Jean Poutine. Classic. Haha.
I like the part in our story where they are in BK, and the guy spits on Claude Leblanc's burger casueing him to almost pass out.
Alright boys, I can guarantee that at BK no one would spit in your burger, because if they did, i would own them.
Plus the food there is good. However the story is good we just had to clarify that nothing like that would happen at BK.
Thank you guys for the comments. I agree with bradley, that particular part of the story was very funny. However, I doubt that a burger king clerk would do that to someone's burger, especially with T-Shane running the joint. I'll take his word for it. His shameless self promotion of burger king shows that he will stick up for the place.
Hahaha, his "shameless self promotion of Burger King". Truer words have never been spoken.
hahaha it's funny because it's true. Thurshane your going to be the man behing the mask of the bk king, and get to reck minibikes and stuff. Anyways I got to reply to something else check it.
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